hello again I'm doing now a in-game guide level, where I tell the players how to do certain trophies, and most of it is text gadgets which I did that, but the part I'm struggling is the section where I tell the players, my weird way of organizing trophies, in the intro section.
But first, should this be in the feedback section?
Here is the section:
[5) My trophy guide is separated into three parts, Story-based trophies, Collection-based trophies, and Miscellaneous-based trophies. You need all three to Platinum this game, Story-based trophies are trophies you get always get throughout the game like near impossible to miss them, Collection-based trophies are the trophies that are collectible items that go towards that True Ending, and Miscellaneous-based trophies are trophies that don’t quite fit into the other trophies types or it does fit into Story-based and Collection-based trophies at the same time.]
Could someone please help me fix this section, so it's understandable to an average player.
That’s very kind of you! I’ll leave it at your discretion whether you prefer to mention me, I’m always happy to be associated with community projects but I didn’t put a lot of time into this ;)
Thanks, Pookachoo, it does make better sense your way. I'll get on it right away, Pookachoo, and the others for helping me.
PS to Pookachoo: do you want to be included as a helper to this guide?
It makes sense but I think showing the trophies as a list would make it easier to read, something like this:
*Story Based - these trophies are obtained as you progress through the story and are nearly impossible to miss.
*Collection Based - certain key items must be collected in order to view the game’s True Ending, these also go toward trophies.
*Miscellaneous - various trophies that are not exclusively Story or Collection based.
*Platinum - the final and most difficult trophy, obtained by completing the Story, Collection, and Miscellaneous trophies.
Also some visual representation might help, if it fits the style of your creation, you could used emojis in your text displayer to give each trophy type an icon. Here’s a guide on how to do that https://www.dreamsverse.com/forum/dreams-play-create-share/tutorials-and-tips/10121-how-to-use-emojis-in-a-text-displayer
TAPgiles, the writing part is what I'm messing up on. Like how do I make the writing easier to understand for an average player, playing this game.
What are you trying to do in Dreams that you cannot do? I'm not sure how to help.